Peer Revisions and Editing of Rough Drafts

“Marigolds”  by Eugenia Colliers

“The innocent and the beautiful have no enemy but time.” - William Butler Yeats

Discuss “the loss of innocence” as it unfolds in the main character and narrator of Eugenia Collier’s story “Marigolds.”  Include three examples of “textual evidence” to support the claims made in the third topic sentence (found below), and offer your commentary/analysis in support of your claims and textual evidence.  In other words, follow the Semantic Map Structure as presented in class.

Miss Lottie:

1st Hour

2nd Hour

4th Hour

John Burke

1st Hour

2nd Hour

4th Hour

Someone 1st 2nd 4th

Lizabeth

1st Hour

2nd Hour

4th Hour

Joey

1st Hour

2nd Hour

4th Hour